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The birth of a baby

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by Vixie, Nov 27, 2007.


  1. Vixie

    Vixie PetForums VIP

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    Just something I wrote when my daughter was born

    Perfection

    A breathtaking sight before me, hypnotising, my gaze paralized
    unable to blink for fear of missing even a second of such beauty
    and pricelessness

    A sweet pure smell eminated from the vision before me. Taking
    in the unmistakeable fragrance, evoking blissful memories of the past.

    The first gentle touch of a precious jewel. As soft and smooth as
    silk. A moment that will last a lifetime.

    A lump to my throat and a tear in the eye, the overwhelming joy of
    such a precious gift. A moment captured in the heart and mind
    forever. Perfection
     
  2. Magik

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    did you get writers block?
     
  3. Vixie

    Vixie PetForums VIP

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    look back its there now
     
  4. Esined

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    oh thats nice, :)
     
  5. Vixie

    Vixie PetForums VIP

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    thank you:)
     
  6. Magik

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    rubbish! Doesn't even rhyme!!
     
  7. Vixie

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    Its not supposed to rhyme, and you have no taste cheeky:p
     
  8. Lotsofsmoggies

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    Poems aren't meant to rhyme, only for kids. Is that saying something about you?!:p
     
  9. Magik

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    oooh look at you, you turncoat!! you said it was crap a minute ago!!!
     
  10. Vixie

    Vixie PetForums VIP

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    you wrote it out of context
    It means something good when used correctly
     
  11. Magik

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    if that makes you feel better about it ok!!!
     
  12. Vixie

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    Its good enough to be published thankyou very much
    anyway got to go now bye
     
  13. Magik

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    I know. I just have different taste... I'm more of a lymerick kind of guy! I was only joking...dont go!! xxxxxx
     
  14. Vixie

    Vixie PetForums VIP

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    you said you were a lymerick kind of guy, I will have to write one just for you:D:D:D
    just thought of the perfect one:)
     
  15. Its a so called White Verces...when it doesnot rhimes but sounds beautiful.
     
  16. Vixie

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    Thank you Elena:)
     
  17. Hi Lotsofmoggies! Your name sounds like a paradise!
     
  18. Vixie

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    cheers, just something to look back at and remember the day, not that I could ever forget:)
     
  19. What is she looks like?
     
  20. Vixie

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    she looks like an angel, and has the temper os the devil, she is two next month, will scan baby pic tomorrow an add here
     

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